Metaphors

For the past week in Te Ngahere we have been working on elaborating our  metaphor poems. Our WALT: was to use language features to paint a picture in the readers head. Mostly I just had to find better words to make my poem more exciting and interesting to read. I enjoyed finding new and more interesting words. I really like my finished copy. I hope you like my new and  improved poem.

Astin is . . . 

 Astin is a Dolphin, smart and intelligent 

Astin is a Kauri tree, tall and determined 

Astin is a Bee, busy and helpful

Astin is the color blue, peacemaking and gentle 

 Astin is a star, luminous and dazzling