Last week in Te Ngahere we started learning how to write metaphors and use them in our writing. We had to write a poem using metaphors to describe ourselves. We were not allowed to use the words because and I. Our poem had to have five metaphors. I really enjoyed comparing myself with things that I like. I think I did well at using metaphors but next time I need to use more interesting describing words. I think I can do a lot better next time. This is my first draft.
Astin is . . .
Astin is a star, shiny and bright
Astin is an elephant, remembers everything
Astin is a tree that never stops growing
Astin is a book, every day a new chapter
Astin is a apple tree, each fruit is a new idea
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Astin,
I think your metaphor poem is very cool. I also think that it describes you well. I think you did an awesome job of using metaphors in your writing, keep up the good work!
Arihia