Last week on Friday, Paihia School held their annual Cross Country at Bledisloe Domain. This week Te Ngahere had to write recounts about Cross Country. Instead of writing about the whole day, we had to just write about one part of it. I wrote about waiting for the race and running the race. I think did well to include some descriptive language and also using paragraphs correctly. I could works on using more detailed words and interesting adjectives. This is just a draft piece of writing.
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